User:AstroWiki143/History of neuroimaging/Bibliography

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Bibliography

Edit this section to compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.

• Makin, Simon. “The Man Who Weighed Thoughts.” New Scientist, vol. 220, no. 2943, Nov. 2013, pp. 39–41. EBSCOhost, https://doi-org.ezproxy.paradisevalley.edu/10.1016/S0262-4079(13)62694-9.
  • Periodical about Angelo Mosso. It's essentially his origin story and how his first experiments went that went a long way with neuroimaging.
• Sandrone, Stefano, et al. “Weighing brain activity with the balance: Angelo Mosso’s original manuscripts come to light.” Oxford Academic: Brain, vol. 137, no. 2, 2013, pp. 621–633, https://doi.org/10.1093/brain/awt091.
  • This one is already cited but I added it again because I think there is more from it that can be used. Also, it will be helpful to reference when we edit and reword a lot of what's already been written due to some of it being verbatim from the article.
• Guy-Evans, Olivia. “Neuroimaging Techniques and What a Brain Image Can Tell Us.” Simply Psychology, 19 Sept. 2023, www.simplypsychology.org/neuroimaging.html.
  • I'm not sure if this is a good enough source to use, but I think it can be a good place to pull from.
• Bakshi, Rohit. “History of Neuroimaging.” History of Neuroimaging | The American Society of Neuroimaging, www.asnweb.org/i4a/pages/index.cfm?pageid=3334. Accessed 29 Sept. 2023.
  • This one I think is another one that might be useful to pull from.
• “History of Neuroimaging.” Wikidoc, www.wikidoc.org/index.php/History_of_neuroimaging. Accessed 29 Sept. 2023.
  • This one I added because I didn't even know about wikidoc somehow and thought it was interesting.
• "History of Neuroimaging | The American Society of Neuroimaging". https://www.asnweb.org/i4a/pages/index.cfm?pageid=3334. Retrieved 2023-10-02.
  • This source has more of those specific dates the article is lacking; while also being a good source for general information on the topic.
• Shorvon, Simon D. (2009-03). "A history of neuroimaging in epilepsy 1909–2009". Epilepsia. 50 (s3): 39–49. doi: https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/j.1528-1167.2009.02038.x. ISSN 0013-9580.
  • A longer list of dates going further back. The other content is specialized in neuroimaging's use for treating epilepsy.
• "The Early Years of Brain Imaging". American Scientist. https://www.americanscientist.org/article/the-early-years-of-brain-imaging. 2023-02-07. Retrieved 2023-10-02.
  • This article really adds more new information to the history aspect of the article. This article specializes in the beginnings of neuroimaging. It also has images :)

• "Mishra, Shri Kant; Singh, Parampreet (2010-04). "History of Neuroimaging: The Legacy of William Oldendorf". Journal of Child Neurology. 25 (4): 508–517. doi:10.1177/0883073809359083. ISSN 0883-0738. {{cite journal}}: Empty citation (help): Check date values in: |date= (help)
  • This article dives deeper into the history of William Oldendorf who played an important role in the development of early neuroimaging. Our article talks about him briefly, but more information may be relevant.

• "Dr. William Henry Oldendorf". www.research.va.gov. 2022-04-06. Retrieved 2023-10-03.
  • This article gives a more detailed history of William Oldendorf and is better organized.
• Gaillard, Frank. "Pneumoencephalography | Radiology Reference Article | Radiopaedia.org". Radiopaedia. Retrieved 2023-10-03.
  • This article gives a great history on Pneumoencephalography which was developed by Walter E Dandy, who is mentioned in our article. This is one of the major techniques developed in neuroimagining ans is a vital part of its developing history.

Outline of proposed changes

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Proposed Changes

• I think the article needs a lot more citations. There are entire paragraphs and even sections without a single one.
• Rewording needs to happen throughout the article due to information being added verbatim from sources.
• Someone in the talk page in the article questioned whether the last section "Recent breakthroughs" should even be in this article and I think it is worth discussing.
• Restructuring/Reorganization of the sections and/or the addition of sections could prove useful to the overall cohesiveness of the article.
• MAJOR reorganization and removal of some sections are needed. OR renaming of the article entirely.
• Current sections focus too much on neuroimaging as a whole and not on its history.
• The addition of images would be great to add more interest and a good visual for some of the different modalities and people mentioned
• Highlighting other people who played a big part in the history of neuroimaging would be a good addition as well.
• The article has many incomplete or vague dates. Adding more specific dates, particularly the years, would improve the article.
• A brief summary of neuroimaging would be a nice addition to reader comprehension. It could add gateways for additional sections to add to the topic more meaningfully.