User:Asrogers23/Jim Henson/notes
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intro
p2
rephrased, cut unnecessary info
p3
added innovation, reworded
early life
removed year 1975 to more accurately reflect source
career - education
p2
clarify his early puppet and school experience
split into separate subsection
early career
created p1 for WTOP-TV, he was hired initially as a puppeteer not a puppet maker at WTOP
and p2 to introduce Sam and Friends
p3
removed Proscenium arch link, replaced with Puppet theatre, add info about Henson pioneering the use of puppetry that hid the puppeteer from view of the camera and could could interact w/ human actors, reference
changed wording of "live and sensitivity" quote
added Kermit info
p4
rephrased for accuracy and relevance, added block quote
p5
clarified Europe trip, expanded on relationship with Jane
TV and muppets
p1
added citation
p2
rephrasing
sesame street
p1
removed tangential sentence about a specific puppet performer
expansion of audience
p2
expanded on Muppet Show cast to indicate character prominence and tie in the mention of Animal
transition to the big screen
p3
removed line break to append last sentence
p4
moved to its own paragraph, added sources
personal life
added details about marriage, with source