User:Ashara Sakin

Hi everyone, my name is Ashara. I live in this beautiful, Pacific State that is really ordinary. I love writing poetry and singing while I do. I am very ambitious, when I am engaged in learning new subjects in college. I like seeing people smile due, to the happiness that I have created for them. I am studying early childhood education, because I want to see so many children smile when they finally comprehend what they are being taught. I am a three time cancer survivor, who is willing to be challenged and will take on the challenge. I love playing with dogs and cats because they are my part of my muse.

Wikipedia has made me realize that anything can be created, and challenged to be fiction or non-fiction. Wikipedia gave me the knowledge to inhale "Posting", which means I have to watch what I post due to the knowledge of people and how they react to what you post. Wikipedia gives you free space to tell your story or a story that you want to share with the world. You can edit your work and help other people by editing there work or adding information.

Article Critique

The reason why I chose this topic is because I love dancing like a perfectionist Ballerina, due to the slow and softly movements of this dancing technique. The movement of ballet is unique, especially when it is being show on the bar. When you are practicing ballet you have to be well coordinated and build leg strength. Building you posture and strength will help you build your confidence inside. Ballet makes it easier for me to relax but at the same time create an ordinary technique. When you are a professional Ballerina you have to meet so many requirements in order to succeed as a Ballerina due to where you want to set your standards. Ballet is a Beautiful, modern, sport that some people take for granted. I visited the ballet technique page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Is the article up to date?, are the citations as current as possible?, and are there irrelevant sections or sentences? The article that I have chosen is ballet technique.

Up to Date

Is this article up to date I ask myself? Yes, It was last edited on September 14, 2018 at 17:15. This article is edit by so many human beings all around the world. As you can see a lot of people like seeing a Ballerina performance, due to there entertainment hobbies category.

Citations

The second question I ask myself is: Are there any citations as current as possible? No, the last citation was Muriel (1952). This citation is 66 years old and 5 months old, meaning this citation current can be fixed by adding another citation, but this time a current one. The citations in this article "Ballet Technique" are not made just to stay there for ever, but just to keep in mind ever once in a blue moon need to be edited or looked at for more visionary or mental support.

Irrelevant sections or sentences

The third question is, are there any irrelevant sections or sentences? No, every sentence connects with each other. They stay on topic and cite the information that they have found. So ballet is what I will always be interested in, due to its strong curiosity between the posture of the body and the perfectionist movement.

source: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ballet_technique