User:Angeljim

Bio

About me:

Thank you for visiting my user page, I am a running start student trying to get a degree in psychology. I love to do many things in my spare time while also working towards my future.

For my future career I want to work at a treatment center, being a psychologist and or therapist. I myself attended a 90-day treatment plan and it helped me immensely, the staff there and the girls were amazing, and it improved my overall wellbeing very much. I want to work at a treatment center so I can help adolescence like myself find peace with their mind and their body. When I get older probably around 60, I would love to be an elementary school art teacher with the knowledge I'll have in mental health as well as art it would be great to help young children express themselves. I love art, I love drawing, painting, and sewing clothing. I've always loved art and I assume I will continue too throughout my life. I also enjoy going thrifting and finding funny clothes and making them cute. I love fashion and I love makeup. I express myself through my art and my style and I hope throughout my future I can encourage people to do the same. I also love my cats. My cats are my children and I spend all my time with them, I have two beautiful kittens who are very crazy. When my kitten gets nervous her ears flatten and she starts to slap people that's a sign of her being scared or mad. I hope when I get married me and my partner will share the same interests and have tons of cats together. There's a lot more about me but these are my main interests and goals for my life.

My Wikipedia interests

I have a lot of ideas for what I could write about on this Wikipedia page, but I think my main interest would be mental health. I think that I am a very empathetic person, and I can understand people's emotions very well. I take a strong interest in the way the brain works and how your childhood can affect your future wellbeing. I also am very interested in mental illnesses and people with neurodivergence. I hope to spend my future learning and writing about all the different things I learn and improving my skills on how to better comfort and understand people with mental health problems. I think even with the little information I have on mental health I could write so much about it, but I'd rather wait till I know so much more information and can go above and beyond with it. Thank you for reading about me and spending your time taking interest in what I have to say.

Article evaluation

[1]I have loved Bikini Kill for many years, one of my very close friends introduced me to them awhile back and I have loved them since. I am not super into the riot girl movement, but I still enjoy their music. Bikini kill is a punk rock girl band and punk and metal are my favorite music genres so of course i love them as well. I was hoping Wikipedia would have a good article on them and I am here to review the citation's, grammar, and see if the articles up to date.

Citations

All of the facts in the Wikipedia source I have found on bikini kill seem very solid, though there are quite a few dead links that no longer lead to anywhere. But that's only 3 sites out of the 20 they have so I think it's still a good source. Only one of the sources seem slightly biased. They said Bikini Kill was a very prominent band which was true, but it was a very hated band by men. Men hated how they preached about feminism and would even try and assault the band members. All the facts are cited to appropriate articles.

Age

All the articles they cited in the Wikipedia page on Bikini Kill are pretty up to date. There was one from 2009 but that's the oldest. Most were from 2015-2019. That is understandable because Bikini Kill just reunited and had a tour so, the information on them hadn't changed much enough for there to be constant articles made on them. If anything was out of date on the article it could be updating everyone on their current tour. Telling us about what happened on it and if there were any significant events. But otherwise, those things the article is very up to date.

Grammar

This is a very good article. It addresses the band and them reuniting the movement riot girls was doing. It's a very neural paragraph and has no opinions in it. It simply states all the facts and where abouts of Bikini Kill. The article doesn't have any grammatical errors or false information it's a good article and I wouldn't see any changes that need to be made. 

Conclusion

Overall, I'd say this is a good paragraph. The only things that really could change would be updating it. None of the cites it provides are too old they just have new information that could be shared. The only somewhat biased thing said was in a source they cited. So, in itself the article didn't seem biased. This is a very good article that illustrates Bikini Kill in very good way.