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User:Aliciab5334/Michael Johnson (Immunobiology)/Dogebisquit Peer Review

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Aliciab5334

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aliciab5334/Michael_Johnson_%28Immunobiology%29/Dogebisquit_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

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What’s Good?

Good structure and size on the sections. Good photo. Good sources.

Lead Paragraph

Good information and good size, however it is missing a piece from the Early Life and Education section.

Clear Structure

Very well organized structure, I like the info box with the photo and the overall format of the article looks good to read.

Balanced Sections

The sections are well balanced, I just think the lead could use a sentence or two to include the Early Life and Education maybe.

Neutral Content + Reliable Sources

Content looks neutral given the sources. Sources look reliable and scholarly.

General Comments

I love the way this article looks, but maybe it could use a split in the early life section to look even more structured?

Good job!