User:AlexandriaLee
SChadda Comments on Anti-Mullerian Hormone:
I think this article is clear and concise overall. Upon initial read, I had a little bit of trouble with some of the terms, but by googling/searching other wikipedia articles I was able to deduce the main points being addressed. Therefore, I think it is possible to add some general information about the purpose of granulosa cells, and their purpose in humans to allow for efficient reading by the less subject informed reader, but it is not necessary and may not tie into the fundamentals of how a Wikipedia article should be formatted.
I was a little confused by this sentence in the Biomarker of Polycystic Ovary Syndrome section:
"As an endocrine disorder, protein hormones like AMH are affected, where AMH levels have been found to be nearly two to three times higher in women with PCOS than in normal type women, as a result of increased follicle count number, and therefore increased granulosa cells."
I did not understand exactly how an increased follicle count number related to an increase in granulosa cells. Again, probably something that people could figure out with a little bit of extra research, but I thought perhaps creating that connection more explicitly could be useful.
Overall, however, I think the article is very well worded and presents solid information about the Anti-Mullerian Hormone and its effects in the female and male reproductive systems.
[1] - Review Article
Anti-Müllerian hormone is a protein hormone that is part of the transforming growth factor β family. It has received attention most recently its role in ovarian testing and marker of ovarian function.
Adipose tissue macrophages have been linked to cases of obesity in that obesity has been evaluated to have inflammatory contributions, partly due to these macrophages.
I know that the estrogen page is pretty well edited, but I noticed there wasn't a section on its role in reproductive/fertility subjects.
Aromatase is important for the synthesis of estrogen from testosterone.