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Article draft in sandbox of Jgmurphy102

Notes on 4-hydroxybenzoate 3-monooxygenase:

• Structural studies due for update
• Needs in-text citations
• No information regarding the mechanism at all
• No information regarding active site residues in the introduction
• "The oxygen incorporated need not be derived from O2 with NADH or NADPH as one donor, and incorporation of one atom o oxygen into the other donor." This sentence could be worded much better or omitted entirely. Very confusing.
• Listing off the names in bold is very distracting
• Images generated from Pymol or similar software would help
• Showing the basic reaction scheme and then immediately stating what the substrates and products are is pretty redundant

Notes on Enzyme Catalysis:

• Article very well organized.
• In-text citations to reputable sources
• Good use of figures for reaction mechanisms
• "Examples of Catalytic Mechanisms" section has a bunch of typos and could use more information for each example