User:18jaflores/Starbucks Reserve/AE339 Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? (18jaflores)
• Link to draft you're reviewing: User:18jaflores/Starbucks Reserve

Lead

Guiding questions:

• Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes it has new updated content.
• Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes
• Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? yes
• Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? no
• Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? The lead is concise with important information needed to explain the subject.

Content

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
• Is the content added up-to-date?Yes
• Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? yes

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added neutral? yes
• Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no
• Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? over represented
• Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? It more informative then persuasive

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

• Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? no
• Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? yea
• Are the sources current? yea
• Check a few links. Do they work? yes

Organization

Guiding questions:

• Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes it is easy to read and right to the point
• Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? no
• Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes it is in one section it could have more

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

• Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? yes definitely to give us an idea what it looks like
• Are images well-captioned? n/a
• Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?n/a
• Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? n/a

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

• Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? yes
• How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? yes
• Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? no
• Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? yes

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

• Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? add more
• What are the strengths of the content added? it is very straight to the point
• How can the content added be improved? add more to it and more pictures