Why is it 'from' you? If the review hasn't been started, perhaps it shouldn't say who it comes from (apart from a sig at the end)
I personally prefer the yellow highlight; people are used to that being used for emphasis.
I think my 1-line 'demo' of bold/links might be better - or maybe combined with yours, into bullets, perhaps. I don't think it's worth mentioninfg italics.
I don't like the bullet-pointed "Citing sources" and "Editing tips" - I think it's better to just wikilink within the text
I'll try to get a doc up soon. The IP part is {{{2}}}, {{subst:Welcome AfC||a}}. {{{1}}} is the state of their article, defaults to P but can also be D or H if they did not already get this message. {{{article}}} is the article, should be in form "article=John Smith". I think you're right about the "from", bullets, and the yellow, for the from part, should we still leave a link to the user talk page anyhow? fetchcomms☛23:58, 20 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
