Template talk:Did you know/Soldan International Studies High School
Soldan International Studies High School
[edit]- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 17:30, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
- ... that future Chairman of the Federal Reserve William McChesney Martin and future Secretary of Defense Clark Clifford were tennis doubles partners in 1922 at Soldan High School in St. Louis, Missouri?
- Reviewed: Henry Godwin (army officer)
- Comment: The hook is cited in Ref #10 on page 118
5x expanded by Poroubalous (talk). Self nom at 18:31, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- Hook: Length is fine, fact is cited, interest isn't bad. I've made some minor changes to it.
- Article: Length and date check out. There are sourcing issues; notable alumni section isn't all referenced (should be improved), article has an unreliable source tag, and some of the references are bare URLs. Copyright for images seems fine. Paraphrasing seems fine.
- Summary:
Please fix the referencing issues, and then it will be good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:43, 16 August 2011 (UTC)
- I've fixed the reference presentation, identified the unidentified book reference, and got rid of all the all-caps in newspaper headlines (and replaced the couple of references that were about another school with the correct ones!). All the notable alums have refs, but the reliability tag remains on one ref. Yngvadottir (talk) 00:00, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
my vote would be to accept it as is - if the sentence had been unreferenced, we wouldn't be hugely worried, and the tag notes that readers can find a better ref. The other option is removing the sentence, but either way I think this can be greenlit. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:17, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
- I've fixed the reference presentation, identified the unidentified book reference, and got rid of all the all-caps in newspaper headlines (and replaced the couple of references that were about another school with the correct ones!). All the notable alums have refs, but the reliability tag remains on one ref. Yngvadottir (talk) 00:00, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
