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Fukuji Dam
[edit]- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know, unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page). No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted
... that Fukuji Dam is the tallest dam in Okinawa, Japan?
Created by NortyNort (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 21:50, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
Since every city with a dam has a tallest dam, how about:
- ALT1: ... that although construction of the Fukuji Dam was begun by the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers, the Japanese government was responsible for its completion? Rcej (Robert) – talk 05:48, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
- I'm okay with ALT1, but it maybe better if the second half is simply "it was completed by the Japanese government?" as the Japanese government could have chosen to abandon the project. --PFHLai (talk) 09:41, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed it. Rcej (Robert) – talk 06:25, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
- I'm okay with ALT1, but it maybe better if the second half is simply "it was completed by the Japanese government?" as the Japanese government could have chosen to abandon the project. --PFHLai (talk) 09:41, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that although construction of the Fukuji Dam was begun by the U.S. Army Corps of Engineers, the Japanese government was responsible for its completion? Rcej (Robert) – talk 05:48, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
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- Image suitability, if applicable: n/a
- ALT hooks, if proposed: Going with ALT1 hook. Rcej (Robert) – talk
Article
- Length: prose is 1721 per DYKcheck. Rcej (Robert) – talk
- Vintage: Done Rcej (Robert) – talk
- Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Done Rcej (Robert) – talk
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- Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: none Rcej (Robert) – talk
ALT1 hook verified AGF foreign language online. We are good to go! Rcej (Robert) – talk 06:25, 31 July 2011 (UTC)- Moved to Template:Did you know/Queue/_ on ____ by ____.