Template talk:Did you know/Deaf Wrestlefest

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:14, 23 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Deaf Wrestlefest

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... that Deaf Wrestlefest, an independent wrestling supercard, serves as a benefit show for the Western Pennsylvania School for the Deaf?

ALT1:... that James J. Dillon, a retired wrestler and one-time manager for the Four Horsemen, made his first in-ring appearance since 1989 at Deaf Wrestlefest 2009?
ALT2:... that the founder of Deaf Wrestlefest, an annual benefit show for the Western Pennsylvania School for the Deaf, had two hearing-impaired children who attended the school?
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Created/expanded by 71.184.38.48 (talk). Self nom at 17:08, 13 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Length, history, and hook facts check out, no policy issues (WP:NPOV, WP:CITE) I could see, didn't see any concerns in spot check for plagiarism/paraphrase. I think a better hook might be as follows:

ALT3 ... that Deaf Wrestlefest provides funding for educational programs for hearing-impaired students? rʨanaɢ (talk) 17:55, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I like it. Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 22 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]