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Dacian bracelets

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

Dacian gold bracelet, dated to 1st century BC - 1st c. AD, from Sarmizegetusa, Romania

... that Dacian bracelets were also used as currency and votive offerings?

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5x expanded by Boldwin (talk), Codrinb (talk). Nominated by Codrinb (talk) at 20:25, 3 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

Length, format, content rules: long enough; but perhaps too long -- see comment below. --Epeefleche (talk) 19:39, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: AGF; off-web source.--Epeefleche (talk) 19:42, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: Fine.--Epeefleche (talk) 19:47, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Image suitability, if applicable: --Epeefleche (talk) 19:39, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed: NA--Epeefleche (talk) 19:47, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Article

Length: --Epeefleche (talk) 19:39, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: --Epeefleche (talk) 19:48, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): AGF; largely off-web sources.--Epeefleche (talk) 19:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality:
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: AGF; largely off-web sources.--Epeefleche (talk) 19:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
copyvio (images): OK, assuming the National Museum of Romanian History allows photos to be taken of its objects.--Epeefleche (talk) 19:57, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:

1) The hook needs some fine-tuning. It uses the word "also", without clarification as to what is being referred to in the first place (presumably, the sense is "in addition to being worn as jewelry", but I think it would read better with something spelling that out if we are going to use the phrase "also". 2) The article is great and very complete, but now at 140K bytes; I would suggest that some of it be made into a separate article, to bring it closer to 100K bytes (or below).--Epeefleche (talk) 19:47, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

* 1.A) I requested the Guild of Copy Editors to help with it. And, I am going to add the url of the books (google books). I am revisiting the article.Boldwin (talk) 03:19, 9 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]