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Caxton Hall

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)

~~... that Caxton Hall in Westminster, London, was the venue for many high society and celebrity weddings where the couple required a civil marriage?~~

Reviewed: The article that the nominator has reviewed

Created by Lumos3 (talk). Self nom at 09:22, 28 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: The hook is in the lead but not sourced anywhere in the article.—Biosketch (talk) 02:43, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Needs to be sourced, per my comment below. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Interest: Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Image suitability, if applicable: None. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article

Length: —Biosketch (talk) 02:43, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: —Biosketch (talk) 02:43, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Referencing includes rather bare URLs. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality: Aymatth2 (talk) 13:35, 12 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Spotcheck is fine. AGF on offline source. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio: Image is cited to Geograph Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion: To the nom: please either duplicate the part about "used by high society and celebrities who did not marry in church" later in the article with a reference, or else indicate what the source is for that claim in the lead. Also, you should review another nomination.—Biosketch (talk) 02:43, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Also, it would be good to explain what was meant by "in the church": In the Catholic church? In the Church of England? In any Christian church? --Slashme (talk) 11:59, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have reworded the hook so that it conform to the intro in the article. Lumos3 (talk) 15:39, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for giving you a hard time with this, but the hook still isn't sourced anywhere in the article.—Biosketch (talk) 09:12, 3 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have not cited a source in the introduction as per WP:LEADCITE guidance. Its use as a celebrity registry office is mentioned in all sources, especially the Museum of London one in the paragraph on weddings. I have added the Encyclopedia of London one to this paragraph to back this up. Lumos3 (talk) 08:13, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

If the hook fact is not in the body of the article, it should be cited in the lead. That is both DYK and (as far as I know) Wikipedia policy. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:01, 6 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Sourcing needs to be cleaned up. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:12, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Instead of trying to find a source for all of the specifics in the original hook, let's try an alternative version of the hook that is more clearly supported by sources:

ALT1: ... that Caxton Hall in Westminster, London, was the venue for many high society and celebrity weddings, including marriages of two Beatles, a future Prime Minister, and several movie stars? --Orlady (talk) 19:53, 16 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1 good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:22, 17 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]