Template talk:Did you know/Brandreth Pill Factory
Brandreth Pill Factory
[edit]- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know, unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page). No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted
- ... that the 1872 main building (pictured) at the Brandreth Pill Factory in Ossining, New York, was one of the first to have an Otis elevator installed?
- Reviewed: IDEA: The Intellectual Property Law Review ([1])
5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Self nom at 04:01, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Everything looks good except one little ticky-tack that can be easily fixed. The date and 5x expansion are fine. The sourcing and prose are solid. The photo is by the nominator and has the appropriate licensing. And the ticky-tack? The source says "one of the first Otis elevators was installed inside the factory building in approximately 1880." The hook is ambiguous but appears to suggestion more than one elevator. I known, not a big deal, but can we change the hook to read "... to have Otis elevators installed?" With that done, it's good to go. Cbl62 (talk) 06:24, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- Seems to have been done. Daniel Case (talk) 20:49, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- Oops. I meant to say it should be changed to "... to have an Otis elevator installed?" If that's OK by you, I'll check it as approved. Cbl62 (talk) 22:37, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- There goes. Daniel Case (talk) 04:09, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
- Oops. I meant to say it should be changed to "... to have an Otis elevator installed?" If that's OK by you, I'll check it as approved. Cbl62 (talk) 22:37, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
Good to go, now. Cbl62 (talk) 05:21, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
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