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Batara Kala
[edit]- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk)
- ... that in Javanese mythology, eclipses are caused by Batara Kala (pictured) trying to devour either the Sun or Moon?
- Reviewed: If you reviewed another article before listing this DYK nomination, put it here
- Comment: please proofread as I am not a native English speker
Created/expanded by Awewe (talk). Self nom at 02:44, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:
Hook
- Length, format, content rules: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Source: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Interest: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Image suitability, if applicable:
- ALT hooks, if proposed:
- ALT1: ... that according to some legends, Batara Kala was conceived when a fish swallowed Shiva's sperm?
Article
- Length: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Vintage: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Has several unsourced sentences, and the book by John Emigh does not fully support the text it is cited for --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Neutrality: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Copyvio: --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: --Epipelagic (talk) 08:18, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
Comments/discussion:
- To reviewer: Please note that DYK Check does not show a 5x expansion because of this vandalised version. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:38, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
- I've also taken the liberty of fixing the hook a little (grammar) Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:47, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
- General sourcing needs more attention --Epipelagic (talk) 04:13, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- How's this? Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:46, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- Okay to go --Epipelagic (talk) 08:17, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- Suggested another ALT. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:23, 5 August 2011 (UTC)