Template talk:Did you know/Babette Rosmond

Babette Rosmond

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know, unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted

... that author Babette Rosmond (1921–97) was an important early advocate against traditional treatments for breast cancer?

Reviewed: University of California, Santa Barbara Library

Created by Gamaliel (talk). Self nom at 23:12, 25 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Length, format, content rules: Tony (talk) 01:41, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source:Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: Good, but could add her years? Tony (talk) 01:41, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to make additions/adjustments, but I'm not sure what you have in mind here. Gamaliel (talk) 02:07, 26 July 2011 (UTC) I've done it; but you could remove the year range in the hook and replace with (from the 1970s until her death in 1997) if you want ... up to you. Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Article

Length:Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality:Tony (talk) 03:13, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing:
Copyvio:
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: I ran the dash script to correct the opening. Looks good. One thing you might address later is the rather cluttered ref tag method. I've never seen it before. Prose OK for DYK, but room for polishing later (e.g., second stub-para). Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments/discussion: Good. Important topic. Please do more! Tony (talk) 03:11, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Making up prep here, I hope I am right in assuming that the filled out review and Tony's enthusiastic final comment mean that this was approved by Tony, despite not having the actual symbol on it. Sharktopus ^talk 02:58, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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