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Acer douglasense

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle}

... that the extinct Alaskan maple Acer douglasense is the type and only species for the Acer section Douglasa?

Reviewed: Trigonopterus oblongus ([1])

Created/expanded by Kevmin (talk). Self nom at 00:00, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Alt1 ... that the early Eocene maple species Acer douglasense is the second oldest maple known from Alaska?

Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook

Length, format, content rules: ALT1 is ok Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Source: AGF Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Interest: Rather impenetrable. All of those technical words make it pretty unhooky. "section"? Could you simplify and make it punchier? Tony (talk) 01:45, 26 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Image suitability: none Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
ALT hooks, if proposed:

Article

Length: Sharktopus ^talk 03:00, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Vintage: Sharktopus ^talk 03:00, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Only one reference for the whole article, and that one is offline. Sharktopus ^talk 03:00, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Neutrality: Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: No online duplication found, agf on offline source Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Copyvio: No online duplication found, agf on offline source Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: A lot of redlinks in the article. They should either be linked to real articles or else unlinked, for aesthetic reasons. Sharktopus ^talk 03:00, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments/discussion:

alt 1 hook added on July 26, but no further discussion has happened. Is Tony1 still here?--Kev min § 05:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GTG but please clean up redlinks and if possible add another source. Sharktopus ^talk 03:26, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I dont think 5 links is an exorbitant amount to be honest, but I have unlinked the geologic formations, bringing it down to two species aad a genus which are red-links. The species has only had the one paper, the type description, published. Thus additional references are not available. --Kev min § 03:58, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the effort. I also removed a couple of redlinks, in one case by creating a stub for Kenai Group. Sharktopus ^talk 04:15, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Can someone propose an ALT here that's preferable less impenetrable? Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 12:41, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]