Template:Did you know nominations/Yao Yuan Hao
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 17:33, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
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Yao Yuan Hao
[edit]... that Taiwanese actor Yao Yuanhao was given a hair cut inspired from a character's hair in Musashi no Ken Japanese manga to make him look humorous in Big Red Riding Hood TV series?
Created by 001Jrm (talk). Self-nominated at 18:39, 1 June 2015 (UTC).
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... that the Taiwanese actor Yao Yuanhao's hair cut in the TV series Big Red Riding Hood was inspired by that of a character in the Japanese manga Musashi no Ken in an attempt to make him look more humorous? - would be more grammatically correct. --Khajidha (talk) 17:01, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
- It would, but it would also be over the 200 character limit for DYK nominations. ALT2 below is just a bit shorter, and within the limits at 193 characters (including spaces):
- ALT2: ... that Taiwanese actor Yao Yuanhao's haircut in the TV series Big Red Riding Hood, chosen to make him look more humorous, was inspired by that of a character in the Japanese manga Musashi no Ken?
Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:57, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
From a DYK perspective this article is satisfactory, being new enough and long enough. The hook fact is sourced and the article is neutral. The sources are almost entirely in Chinese so I could not check for copyright issues. (From a personal viewpoint, much of the "Personal life" section about relationships seems out of place in an encyclopedia.) Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:32, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
The Personal Life section reads like a tabloid, and should be significantly shortened before this hits the main page. Yoninah (talk) 19:38, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- Edited the section. Please let me know if I needed to do more. Thank you! 001Jrm (talk) 06:41, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you. @001Jrm: you really must learn the difference between fancruft and encyclopedic writing. I did more copyediting on the article to remove all the fan gossip and unnecessary information that belongs in a tabloid, not Wikipedia. The article is still over 1500 characters, and the ALT2 hook ref is AGF and cited inline. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 13:01, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
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