The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Overall: @Toadboy123: a very interesting article, quite a fascinating character. No copyright problems, and the article is well-written and long enough. However, for the hook, I would personally suggest ALT1: ..that Xiang Xuan participated in the Long March at age nine, instead of the original hook. The reader may think that Xiang was in his early adulthood when he participated, but I think it would be good to indicate at what age he took part in it. Lettlerhello • contribs 16:23, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
@Lettler: Sure, we can proceed with ALT1 for the hook. - Toadboy123 (talk) 21:56, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
@Toadboy123: a very interesting article, quite a fascinating character. No copyright problems, and the article is well-written and long enough. However, for the hook, I would personally suggest ALT1: ..that Xiang Xuan participated in the Long March at age nine, instead of the original hook. The reader may think that Xiang was in his early adulthood when he participated, but I think it would be good to indicate at what age he took part in it. Lettlerhello • contribs 16:23, 26 January 2024 (UTC)