Template:Did you know nominations/Wonderlick

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:19, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

Wonderlick

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... that when two members of alternative rock band Too Much Joy posted 13 songs online under the name Wonderlick, they made $12,000 from online donations alone?

Created by Jinkinson (talk). Self nominated at 16:54, 11 May 2014 (UTC).

Needs QPQ check. Article also needs to be formated (wikifying) with section headers. Long enough, new enough. Big problem is close paraphrasing. In the article it says:
- - "The latter album's title was based on an essay Quirk wrote comparing an AC/DC concert in 2001 at the Arco Arena, where a woman bared her breasts, to the dot-com boom and eventual bust. The essay was originally written for the 2004 anthology This Is Pop and is reprinted in the album’s liner notes."
and the source
- - "Topless at the Arco Arena’s title was inspired by an engaging essay written by Tim Quirk (one-half of Wonderlick) that draws parallels between a woman baring her breasts at a 2001 AC/DC gig in Sacramento, Calif., and the dot-com boom and eventual bust. The piece originally appeared in the 2004 anthology This Is Pop and is reprinted in the album’s liner notes."
These issues will need to get fixed up before it can go on DYK.--v/r - T P 01:28, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

I have tried to fix the issues you raised above, and ~~Im working on the QPQ.~~ I have reviewed Stan's World Cup Song. Jinkinson talk to me 01:38, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

No other copyright/close paraphrasing concerns, hook is cited and factual. ~~Good to go after QPQ.~~--v/r - T P 01:49, 13 May 2014 (UTC)