Template:Did you know nominations/Wirjono Prodjodikoro

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:48, 25 December 2011 (UTC)

Wirjono Prodjodikoro

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... that President Sukarno slighted Chief Justice Wirjono Prodjodikoro by inviting Ruslan Abdulgani for breakfast when Abdulgani was supposed to be before the Supreme Court of Indonesia?

ALT1:... that Wirjono Prodjodikoro, Chief Justice of the Supreme Court of Indonesia, defied tradition by ruling that women had the right to an inheritance?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 14:11, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Blephilia hirsuta

Article review
Length	Newness	Adequate citations	Formatted citations	Reliable sources	Neutrality	Plagiarism
Eisfbnore ^talk	Eisfbnore ^talk	Eisfbnore ^talk AGF for the Indonesian sources and the offline in English I can't access	Eisfbnore ^talk	Eisfbnore ^talk	The section 'Personal life' suffers from peacockery and weasel wordings.	Eisfbnore ^talk

--Eisfbnore ^talk 20:32, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

Personal life section removed as none of it was entirely necessary, although perhaps useful. Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:50, 22 December 2011 (UTC)
Issues have been addressed. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:29, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

Article looks good now, no overt problems. Offline hook refs AGF. I prefer the first hook; I tweaked the language in both. Yoninah (talk) 21:07, 24 December 2011 (UTC)