Template:Did you know nominations/William Wilson McCardle

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 15:31, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

William Wilson McCardle

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... that the New Zealand town of Pahiatua was founded by William Wilson McCardle (pictured)?

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Created/expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 19:11, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Date, length, and hook look good (AGF on hook reference). However, it seems odd that you mention he founded Pahiatua after saying that he moved there. I assume the former came first in his chronology? Ruby 2010/2013 02:17, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Fair point. I want to write more about Pahiatua (there are conflicting sources as to the source of the name) and in working that in, I'll bring this into a more logical sequence. Thanks for your review - much appreciated. Schwede 66 05:26, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I've fixed the issue. Schwede 66 09:30, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. Note that I added (pictured) to hook. Ruby 2010/2013 16:23, 2 July 2012 (UTC)