Template:Did you know nominations/William M. King
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:17, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
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William M. King
- ... that in 1851 William M. King was the Speaker of the House of Representatives during the 3rd session of the Oregon Territorial Legislature?
- Source: Oregon State Archive identifies King as speaker, see the "1851 Territorial Government Legislators and Staff Guide".
- Reviewed: Dowhill Castle
Created by Orygun (talk). Self-nominated at 03:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: I'm not sure about Find-a-Grave as a RS (I remember there has been some controversy over that), but this isn't a FA review, so I will AGF on sources (most of these I can't access anyway). jp×g 03:54, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- @JPxG and Orygun: The hook falls a bit flat for me, given how rich King's life was—maybe something like:
- ALT1: ... that despite being born in Danbury, Connecticut, William M. King became the third Speaker of the Oregon House of Representatives?
- ALT2: ... that William M. King, who was born in Connecticut, lived and worked in New York, Pennsylvania, Ohio, and Missouri before becoming the third Speaker of the Oregon House of Representatives?
- I'll go with ALT0, but do let me know. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 05:56, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
- @JPxG and Orygun: The hook falls a bit flat for me, given how rich King's life was—maybe something like: