Template:Did you know nominations/Wie lieblich sind deine Wohnungen (Schein)
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 22:52, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
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Wie lieblich sind deine Wohnungen (Schein)
- ... that in Wie lieblich sind deine Wohnungen, a choral setting of the first verses from Psalm 84 by Johann Hermann Schein, the composer depicted the flight of a swallow in music? Source: [1] p. 290f and others
- Reviewed: Amritasiddhi
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 16:08, 25 September 2022 (UTC).
Date, size, refs, QPQ, copyvio check, neutrality, all GTG. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Piotrus (talk • contribs)
- @Gerda Arendt and Piotrus: I'm not sure I trust this scholarly analysis as the Definitive Wikivoice Interpretation of the composition. Could the hook be attributed or changed? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:11, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- It's not an interpretation, but what you can see in the written music. However, I'll see if I can find something else. I thought this was catchy for the general reader, but an attribution would make it clumsy. and saying the third time how great the Thomanerchor concert on 8 July was might be repetitive. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:38, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- Definitely catchy – possibly original research. Another hook would be appreciated, unless Piotrus has a different interpretation :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:55, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- I showed the music now in LilyPond, you can listen. the socalled "interpretation" is just a description of the line. I will look at ALTs now, but thought every reader might profit from seeing and hearing it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:10, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- Definitely catchy – possibly original research. Another hook would be appreciated, unless Piotrus has a different interpretation :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:55, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- It's not an interpretation, but what you can see in the written music. However, I'll see if I can find something else. I thought this was catchy for the general reader, but an attribution would make it clumsy. and saying the third time how great the Thomanerchor concert on 8 July was might be repetitive. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:38, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt and Piotrus: I'm not sure I trust this scholarly analysis as the Definitive Wikivoice Interpretation of the composition. Could the hook be attributed or changed? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:11, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
Andreas Reize in 2022
- ALT1: ... that Andreas Reize (pictured) ranked Wie lieblich sind deine Wohnungen, a choral setting of the first verses from Psalm 84 by Johann Hermann Schein, as one of three pinnacles of motets before Bach?
- We probably can't say Thomaskantor, because when he said so he wasn't yet, but he'd likely say the same today. Perhaps the pic could be cropped? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:24, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt, theleekycauldron New ALT is ok. Main hook is borderline, but given "The swallow mentioned in the last line is illustrated by a leap down of an octave, and a slow rise afterward, like a swallows "dive"", I think it is not that far off. Maybe attribute it to the person who said that, and change "the flight of the swallow" the the "dive of the swallow"? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:09, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
- I am happy with ALT1, and have two "Recent deaths" articles waiting, and not even looked today. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:34, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt, theleekycauldron New ALT is ok. Main hook is borderline, but given "The swallow mentioned in the last line is illustrated by a leap down of an octave, and a slow rise afterward, like a swallows "dive"", I think it is not that far off. Maybe attribute it to the person who said that, and change "the flight of the swallow" the the "dive of the swallow"? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:09, 12 October 2022 (UTC)