Template:Did you know nominations/Wealth Partaking Scheme
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 12:47, 13 December 2013 (UTC)
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Wealth Partaking Scheme
[edit]- ... that Wealth Partaking Scheme is a cash disbursement policy by the Macau Government to all the holders of a Macau Resident Identity Card?
- Comment: A new article created in dates
Created by Sdee (talk). Self nominated at 21:06, 15 November 2013 (UTC).
The article has whole sections that are unreferenced, and the language is not up to scratch, for example: "Residents who with valid or renewable Macau Resident Identity Card are the target beneficiaries of the scheme." I would suggest a significant copy-edit be carried out on the article, and references are added so that there is at least one in every paragraph. Further DYK checks not completed. Harrias talk 12:57, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
I have copy-edited the article and added in-line cites to clarify that the content is supported by its sources. I also made a minor tweak to the hook for grammar purposes. Hook is backed up by [1] (confirmed via Google translate). Length, date, and NPOV are good as well and no QPQ review is necessary because the user has two DYKs to date as far as I can see. I put the tick because I don't think I affected the tone of the article with my copy edits so I don't think it is a conflict of interest for me to approve it, although if someone disagrees, that's fine with me. Thingg⊕⊗ 23:42, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
