Template:Did you know nominations/We're Going on a Bear Hunt
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:20, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
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We're Going on a Bear Hunt
[edit]... that Michael Rosen's award-winning children's picture book We're Going on a Bear Hunt started out as an American folk song?[1]- ALT1:
... that Michael Rosen's award-winning children's picture book We're Going on a Bear Hunt was the text used to break the Guinness World Record for the 'Largest Reading Lesson'?[2]
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Created by Just Chilling (talk). Self-nominated at 01:35, 27 January 2017 (UTC).
References
- ^ Tims, Anna (5 November 2012). "How we made: Helen Oxenbury and Michael Rosen on We're Going on a Bear Hunt". The Guardian. Retrieved 3 January 2017.
{{cite news}}: Cite has empty unknown parameter:|1=(help) - ^ "Walker Books & The RNIB". Guinness World Records. Retrieved 25 December 2016.
Nice article about a classic, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I like the second hook better, but would put it the other way round:- ALT2:
... that We're Going on a Bear Hunt, Michael Rosen's award-winning children's picture book, was the text used to break the Guinness World Record for the 'Largest Reading Lesson'? - or more mysteriously (readers will not click if they think you told them all):
- ALT3: ... that We're Going on a Bear Hunt was the text used to break the Guinness World Record for the 'Largest Reading Lesson'?
- In the article, try to format the poems using <poem></poem>. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:14, 4 February 2017 (UTC)
- Yup, I really like ALT3; simple and likely to get folks clicking on the article. Just Chilling (talk) 01:38, 8 February 2017 (UTC)
- Also I have now used the <poem></poem> - thanks for the suggestion! Just Chilling (talk) 01:47, 8 February 2017 (UTC)
fine, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:46, 8 February 2017 (UTC)
- Hi, I came by to promote this, but noticed that the article doesn't give any details about the record-breaking lesson. I added those details from the source and would like to propose this alt hook:
- ALT3a: ... that more than 30,000 children enabled the book We're Going on a Bear Hunt to break the Guinness World Record for the "Largest Reading Lesson"? Yoninah (talk) 21:14, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
- thank you, both are fine with me. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:26, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
- I'm also happy but it was the 1,500 children that broke the record not the 30,000. Just Chilling (talk) 22:00, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
- Probably we are on safer ground using ALT3 ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:19, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
- I'm also happy but it was the 1,500 children that broke the record not the 30,000. Just Chilling (talk) 22:00, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
