The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 13:07, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
Overall: @Sammi Brie:WP:DYKRULES 3b: "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient." And Link 6 goes to page 273 and not to page 895 as it suggests. Link 1 needs additional information as it took me a while to find which page sources what. (CC)Tbhotch™ 22:19, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
@Tbhotch: I typically haven't added that to History Cards (admittedly, they can be quite inscrutable documents for people who are not topic experts). The link mistake was just a mistake—I've fixed this with a correct link to the first page of the FCC decision. The article should already have all the inline citations it needs; thanks for drawing my attention to the incorrect link. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 22:49, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
Well, now I understand why Rule 3b exists. I thought it was bureaucratic but it truly reduces the time of reviewing facts. As a suggestion, you should, either, specify the page(s) the information appears or quote the information because this is DYK, not GAN. I don't need to read the whole FCC decision. After 11 pages I realized I already had read the hook. After rambling on this, everything is OK, the article is sourced, I had to source part of the hook (as requested by WP:DYKRULES#3b), there are no copyright/POV/MOS/DYK violations. (CC)Tbhotch™ 23:50, 1 May 2021 (UTC)
I should have been better at putting a page cite in there, admittedly. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:13, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
Sammi Brie, I tweaked the hook structure slightly to make it less complex, and to remove the date (which is not in the article)
... that confusion over time zone changes in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan resulted in technical violations at WCKD radio, and almost cost the owner an opportunity to build a station in Illinois?
Please let me know if that's not okay. MeegsC (talk) 13:06, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
@MeegsC: It's fine, but the comma should go; the second part isn't a complete sentence. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:23, 2 May 2021 (UTC)
@Sammi Brie: 
(CC) Tbhotch™ 23:50, 1 May 2021 (UTC)