Template:Did you know nominations/Vidame de Chartres

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:32, 29 April 2018 (UTC)

Vidame de Chartres

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Chateau of La Ferté-Vidame, tied to the title

... that holders of the title Vidame de Chartres (feudal base pictured) included a song-writing crusader, a glamorous Renaissance courtier, the writer of famous memoirs, and a businessman turned politician? Various sources, all in French, I'm afraid. Moved to user space 21 March.
- ALT1:... that ...?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Trump (dog)

Created by Johnbod (talk). Self-nominated at 18:45, 22 March 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The hook is a bit long. Perhaps just take out the last clause but I'll leave that up to the promoter. Meanderingbartender (talk) 20:02, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the Vidames de Chartres (feudal base pictured) included a song-writing crusader, a glamorous Renaissance courtier, the writer of famous memoirs, and a businessman turned politician? - just changed at the start, is now 186 chars (including the pictured bit). Johnbod (talk) 21:33, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
Actually: ALT2 ... that the Vidames de Chartres (feudal base pictured) included a song-writing crusader, a glamorous Renaissance courtier, the writer of famous memoirs, and a banker who was guillotined? - this just changed at the start & end, is 183 chars (including the pictured bit). Johnbod (talk) 21:33, 19 April 2018 (UTC)