Template:Did you know nominations/Two Motets, Op. 74 (Brahms)
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:41, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
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Two Motets, Op. 74 (Brahms)
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Two Motets, Op. 74
- ... that the repeated question "Warum?" (Why?) from the Book of Job structures the first of Two Motets, Op. 74 (title page pictured) by Johannes Brahms? Source: several + score
- Reviewed: to come
- Comment: The image shows the style, even if we can't read every word. Hook suggestions welcome.
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 10:38, 1 June 2019 (UTC).
New enough, long enough.Zigzig20s (talk) 23:50, 1 June 2019 (UTC)- I fixed some typos. Could you please address the 'citation needed' issue?Zigzig20s (talk) 00:19, 2 June 2019 (UTC)
- The tone is neutral. No copyright violation detected.
- The hook is short enough.Zigzig20s (talk) 00:25, 2 June 2019 (UTC)
- The hook is a bit long-winded. Could you please find a hookier one?Zigzig20s (talk) 00:30, 2 June 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for looking, busy today. I can't get shorter than "Warum?", an existential question, when dealing with two motets with long titles. More tomorrow. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:56, 2 June 2019 (UTC)
- Please ping me when you do. Thanks.Zigzig20s (talk) 14:06, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
- Zigzig20s, well, I fixed the citation before you asked here. - I think mentioning the well-known Book of Job is better than saying "sacred motets" which has caused readers to ask what's sacred about them - while sacred music is simply a term for music on Christian texts with no liturgical church function, such as Ein deutsches Requiem, which is not a Requiem. When we'll sing it (No. 1) later this months, the piece is simply called Warum?. Listen. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:59, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
- Good to go!Zigzig20s (talk) 16:48, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but there is no QPQ and I can't find an inline cite for the hook fact. Yoninah (talk) 19:55, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
- Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Robyn Benincasa. - I repeated the ref to the first sentence. The motif comes in measures 1, 25, 51, and at the end on page 3. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:25, 30 June 2019 (UTC)
- Good to go!Zigzig20s (talk) 16:48, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
- Zigzig20s, well, I fixed the citation before you asked here. - I think mentioning the well-known Book of Job is better than saying "sacred motets" which has caused readers to ask what's sacred about them - while sacred music is simply a term for music on Christian texts with no liturgical church function, such as Ein deutsches Requiem, which is not a Requiem. When we'll sing it (No. 1) later this months, the piece is simply called Warum?. Listen. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:59, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
- Please ping me when you do. Thanks.Zigzig20s (talk) 14:06, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for looking, busy today. I can't get shorter than "Warum?", an existential question, when dealing with two motets with long titles. More tomorrow. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:56, 2 June 2019 (UTC)
