Template:Did you know nominations/Tsang Kam To

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:52, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Tsang Kam To

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... that Tsang Kam To represented the Hong Kong football team for 2009 East Asian Games and 2010 Asian Games?

Created by Hoising (talk). Self nom at 08:19, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

Hook: Short enough, somewhat interesting, wording fixed. AGF on foreign language sources.

Article: New enough, long enough, image is fine. Needs a copy edit, I've asked the Guild. "In 2010–11 season, Tsang Kam To mostly acted as substitute of captain Lo Kwan Yee and Spanish Dani Cancela." is uncited. AGF on foreign language sources.

Summary:

Hold pending copyedit and referencing. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:34, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

For your question, I had copy-edited those paragraph.hoising (talk) 13:17, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

DYKs need at least one reference per paragraph. Your changes seem to have moved some references around. Could you ensure that there is no unreferenced information in the article? Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:29, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

It's okay now.hoising (talk) 16:02, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Good to go after a copyedit by the Guild. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:25, 7 September 2011 (UTC)