Template:Did you know nominations/Trent Milton
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 03:25, 24 May 2014 (UTC)
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Trent Milton
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- ... that at age 41, snowboarder Trent Milton (pictured) was the oldest Australian competitor at the 2014 Winter Paralympics?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ada Hitchins
- Comment: Was originally nominated as part of a group nom, but nobody likes reviewing these, so I have broken the group up and created separate noms.
Improved to Good Article status by Hawkeye7 (talk). Self nominated at 21:49, 21 May 2014 (UTC).
GA received 8 days before original nomination; accepted. Long enough, well referenced. I fixed a few instances of close paraphrasing, but didn't know what to do with these two lines, which are lifted directly from the source: For the first 28 days of his six-month stay in hospital, Milton suffered post-traumatic amnesia. The following 12 months were spent recovering, largely on his back. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is pd. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 22:25, 21 May 2014 (UTC)- I've re-phrased the sentence in question. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:33, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
