Template:Did you know nominations/Toni Shaw
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:46, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
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Toni Shaw
- ... that in 2019 paralympic swimmer Toni Shaw set a world record in the S9 200m butterfly at the age of 15?[1] Quote: "Toni, 15 – who broke the S9 200m butterfly world record in Berlin last month."
- Comment: My third DYK nomination.
Created by BennyOnTheLoose (talk). Self-nominated at 15:54, 19 February 2020 (UTC).
, New enough, long enough, and written in a neutral tone. The hook is cited to a reliable source and at the end of the sentence. Earwig is under 5% and QPQ not needed.
- Comment BennyOnTheLoose, great article! As a little note, would you be able to split up personal life and career as well as expand on "Her right arm never fully formed." These aren't enough to not pass a DYK but I feel it can be formatted better. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:20, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4 Thanks. I've added a little to the last para, and will look to do the rest later. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:02, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
