Template:Did you know nominations/Tomoki Suzuki (athlete)
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The result was: promoted by Joofjoof (talk) 07:06, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
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Tomoki Suzuki (athlete)
- ... that Tomoki Suzuki won the 2020 Tokyo Marathon by over eight minutes? Source: [1] "Finishing with a time of 1:21:52, he finished 8 minutes and 8 seconds ahead of the second finisher."
Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:24, 18 January 2021 (UTC).
Article was created in the past seven days and has >1500b readable prose. Not sure about the hook. While it's fine, it doesn't really cover the interesting aspect of this person (imo), which is that they're a wheelchair racer. It just implies that they're a normal athlete. I would be willing to pass this as-is but I strongly suggest a more interesting hook. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 04:44, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
- Elliot321 How about:
- ALT1: ... that Tomoki Suzuki won the men's wheelchair race at the 2020 Tokyo Marathon by over eight minutes?
- Is that hook better? Joseph2302 (talk) 15:47, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
