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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 19:06, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

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... that Toil ends with a celtic punk cover of "I'll Fly Away"?

Reviewed: Star Trek (2013 video game)

Created by Guerillero (talk). Self nom at 06:37, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

Issue with the hook: It's heavily implied by the fact that it's a celtic punk band, but you never actually say that "I'll Fly Away" is sung in a celtic punk style on the album. Everything else looks good. Sven Manguard Wha? 01:04, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

I'm actually not sure that the source can support your hook. I know it's obvious, but since it's not in writing, we should consider something else. My suggestion is

ALT 1: ... that the title track of the celtic punk album Toil has been compared to the Bruce Springsteen album Wrecking Ball?

Sven Manguard Wha? 01:14, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

Okay, so I see the new wording, and the citation on the WikiProject Punk talk page, and while I'm slightly reluctant, I'm going to sign off on the original hook. Sven Manguard Wha? 01:22, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- I am fine with either hook. I am not sure which one is more interesting. --Guerillero | My Talk 01:25, 9 January 2013 (UTC)