Template:Did you know nominations/Todd Lake (Oregon)

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:41, 11 October 2014 (UTC)

Todd Lake (Oregon)

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... that Todd Lake (pictured) in the Deschutes National Forest of Oregon is well known for its summer wildflowers display?

Reviewed: Merriam's pocket mouse

Created by Orygun (talk). Self nominated at 02:28, 30 August 2014 (UTC).

This article is new enough and long enough. The image is in the public domain and the hook fact has an inline citation and is backed up by other sources. The article is neutral and I did not detect any copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:29, 6 October 2014 (UTC)

Where is the cite for the hook fact about the summer wildflowers display? Yoninah (talk) 00:30, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

In-line citation is currently at end of first sentence in second paragraph of Flora section. I can move it to end of second sentence so that it covers additional text about main period of blooming being from late June through mid-August (i.e. summer); or you can go with alternate hook that drops "summer" from the hook. Whatever you think is best.--Orygun (talk) 22:11, 7 October 2014 (UTC)

ALT1: ~~... that Todd Lake (pictured) in the Deschutes National Forest of Oregon is well known for its wildflowers display?~~

OK. I think the hook works better with "summer". Hook ref for "well known" is AGF and for "summer" is verified; both cited inline. All DYK criteria checked in original review still stands. Original hook good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:05, 10 October 2014 (UTC)