Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas Patrick Murray

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 10:22, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Thomas Patrick Murray

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... that Ontario MPP Thomas Patrick Murray received a personalized card from Wayne Gretzky on his 100th birthday?

Reviewed: Annie Rowan Forney Daugette

5x expanded by Canadian Paul (talk). Self-nominated at 17:59, 30 June 2016 (UTC).

- Canadian Paul - Was 514 k before expansion, is 2881 so beyond the x5 requirement. Sources look good and covers what needs to be covered it looks like, including sourcing the hook. QPQ is done, no copyright violations, no link issues. This checks out. MPJ-DK 22:04, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

Wayne Gretzky is 100??? E Eng 22:46, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

@EEng and Canadian Paul: Perhaps an ALT1 is in order? Raymie (t • c) 05:37, 10 July 2016 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that on his 100th birthday, Ontario MPP Thomas Patrick Murray received a personalized card from Wayne Gretzky?

Exactement. E Eng 05:40, 10 July 2016 (UTC)

For some reason I had a lot of trouble phrasing the hook and somehow overlooked this obvious and superior solution completely. ALT1 is much better, thank you. Canadian Paul 17:49, 12 July 2016 (UTC)