Template:Did you know nominations/Thiri Zeya Thura of Taungdwin
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:01, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
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Thiri Zeya Thura of Taungdwin
- ... that after a successful siege of Mogaung, Commander Thiri Zeya Thura rushed back to Ava, arriving there in time for the coronation of Narapati I to present the captured sawbwa? Source: (Yazawin Thit Vol. 1 2012: 286) (Hmannan Vol. 2 2003: 82) (Aung-Thwin 2017: 91, 93)
Created by Hybernator (talk). Self-nominated at 18:33, 19 June 2022 (UTC).
New enough and long enough. QPQ present. The interesting (if a bit laden with names) hook is cited with sources: AGF on the offline materials. Must have been fun to have a captured ruler to present to the new king! No textual issues or copyvio. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:39, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
The last two sentences of the Family section are unreferenced. SL93 (talk) 00:18, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
- SL93, I rewrote the sentences, and added references. Please review. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 02:36, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
- Hybernator It looks like "but chronicles do not explicitly mention the mother of each of the children." can be removed as unreferenced. SL93 (talk) 02:54, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
- SL93, removed. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 03:14, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
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- @Hybernator: I added citation needed tags which need to be resolved before promotion. Z1720 (talk) 19:13, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
- Z1720, I typically don't add citations in the short mini-ledes/summaries (at the start of sections) since the points will soon be discussed below. I do agree that the second sentence about Thihapate II of Taungdwin needs one. Anyway, I've added for both; check them out. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 17:15, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
- @Hybernator: Thanks for that. Restoring tick, per review above. Z1720 (talk) 17:29, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
