Template:Did you know nominations/The Vietnamization of New Jersey

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 11:54, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

The Vietnamization of New Jersey

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• ... that the 1976 play The Vietnamization of New Jersey has been noted for its parallels to the United States' involvement in Iraq?

Created/expanded by 28bytes (talk). Self nom at 23:15, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

• I reviewed Pied Monarch. 28bytes (talk) 23:25, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

• . But two comments. First -- the hook has to be fixed; either "was noted" or "has been noted", but not "was been noted". Second, I think the parallel is not to the Iraq War, but to the post-war involvement -- if you agree, you might wish to consider a revision to that in the hook. Best.--Epeefleche (talk) 01:37, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

• D'oh! Thanks for catching that typo (and for the speedy review.) I've updated the hook with a (hopefully) more appropriate target. 28bytes (talk) 02:10, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Best.--Epeefleche (talk) 02:11, 9 November 2011 (UTC)