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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 17:18, 17 August 2019 (UTC)

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The U.S. Air Force Blue

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Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 19:21, 27 July 2019 (UTC).

  • – Hook is interesting but it seems like it's presented in 'poetic' verse, (e.g."men with a dream", "Pretty girl's eyes") rather than in a factual, encyclopedic fashion. You might prefix the hook with, "The U.S. Air Force recruiting song says..." Citation [5] needs a page number. Also, no need to link common knowledge terms like 'sky' and 'girl'. -- Gwillhickers (talk) 19:08, 29 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks, updated and new Alt proposed. Chetsford (talk) 01:32, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
ALT2 is fine. Article is new enough and long enough. Hook is within proper limits and interesting. AGF on citation requiring subscription to view.. Other citation fine. Image (video) created by US gov and is in the public domain. No close para-phrasing, no duplicate links. QPQ satified. -- Good to go. -- Gwillhickers (talk) 23:21, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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