Template:Did you know nominations/The Triggering
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Allen3 talk 12:06, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues
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The Triggering
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Milo Yiannopoulos, one of the three speakers at The Triggering.
... that speakers at The Triggering, a panel discussion on free speech hosted by the College Republicans of UMass Amherst, were booed before they had even spoken?
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... that The Triggering, a panel discussion on free speech hosted by the College Republicans of UMass Amherst, spawned an internet meme based on the Pokémon Jigglypuff? - Comment: Very much open to suggestions for alternate hooks.
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Created by Jujutsuan (talk). Self-nominated at 03:34, 24 July 2016 (UTC).
No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article is new and was created on 03:11, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 7259 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 49.7% confidence. (confirm)
- Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.
- No overall issues detected
- ✓ The media File:Milo Yiannopoulos, Journalist, Broadcaster and Entrepreneur-1441 (8961808556) cropped.jpg is free-use
- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 154 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 160 characters
- ✓ Jujutsuan has fewer than 5 DYK credits. No QPQ required. Note a QPQ will be required after 1 more DYKs.
Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This bot is experimental; please report any issues. This is not a substitute for a human review. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 22:55, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
- To satisfy QPQ, I reviewed Coming of Age in Karhide. juju (hajime! | waza) 03:48, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
All checks out for 1st hook, which I prefer, except the next point. I can confirm the "copyvios" are ok, except for "expected,[2][4] but not to the degree of intensity that actually occurred." In the source "expected" is a quote, the rest apparently the reporter's words. This needs tidying somehow. Article reads nicely. Frankly the subject is of questionable notability, as a student storm in a teacup, but would certainly survive AFD on the media coverage. Johnbod (talk) 15:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
Main hook is awkward → speakers, free speech, spoke all in one sentence. Could be worded better. ALT1 is no longer valid, as it was edited out of the article.- Inbetween the bot review and now, the article has had substantive rewrites by many editors. I think it might be a good idea to have a different reviewer recheck this article. It should also be checked for stability, as it was still being editing as of August 26. — Maile (talk) 13:43, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- It would be helpful if the article started by giving details of the event, facts currently only mentioned but not cited in the lead, rather than just jump straight in to the protests and interruptions. The main hook mentions booing but the article does not so ALT0 will not do. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:17, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
- I have just struck the original hook per Cwmhiraeth's point about booing not being in the article, and a ping to Jujutsuan talk page ten days ago received no response, and the post has been archived. This nomination needs a new hook, as both hooks have been struck. I will post a final ping on the talk page; if there is no response within seven days, I'll be marking this nomination for closure. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:31, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
It has been seven days, and the final ping has been archived from Jujutsuan's talk page. Marking for closure as unsuccessful. BlueMoonset (talk) 11:14, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
