Template:Did you know nominations/The Lab (video game)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 10:20, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
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The Lab (video game)
[edit]... that The Lab, a virtual reality game by Valve that uses the HTC Vive, is set in the Portal universe and features pocket universes?
- Reviewed: Raymond Cazallis Davis
Created by Silver seren (talk). Self-nominated at 00:42, 23 April 2016 (UTC).
Date, length, citations and QPQ all fine. Might lose some clicks to the other links in the hook but they are probably all needed - Basement12 (T.C) 19:11, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
@Silver seren: can we shorten the hook and remove some of the overlinking?- ALT1: ... that The Lab, a virtual reality game by Valve that uses the HTC Vive, features pocket universes? Yoninah (talk) 23:35, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: I wanted to include the set in Portal part, since that's relevant and will make more people interested. How about we remove the HTC Vive part? Since the article itself already included a link there anyways.
- ALT2: ... that The Lab, a virtual reality game by Valve, is set in the Portal universe and features pocket universes?
- How's that? Same number of links as in your alt and about the same length. SilverserenC 03:07, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
- Either Alt fine as slimmed down versions of the original. Suggest going with the nominator's preference for ALT 2 - Basement12 (T.C) 07:10, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
