Template:Did you know nominations/The Indian Struggle
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 00:25, 11 January 2014 (UTC)
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The Indian Struggle
[edit]... that Bose thought Gandhi was "the best policeman the Britisher had in India" in The Indian Struggle?
Created by Ashwin147 (talk). Self nominated at 11:39, 22 December 2013 (UTC).
- Review:
- Article created new on 22 December 2013.
- Long enough, well-sourced, meets Wikipedia guidelines.
- Hook claim is verified here
- I would suggest a different wording of the hook, modified for syntax & clarity (& maybe interest):
- Alt1 ... that Gandhi was "the best policeman the Britisher had in India", according to Subhas Chandra Bose in The Indian Struggle?
- Nice work and thank you for this contribution. groupuscule (talk) 06:50, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
- I'm fine with the ALT hook. Better phrased, I think. Cheers! Ashwin147 (talk) 16:16, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
- Splendid. This book seems like an entrance point to a really interested historical situation. groupuscule (talk) 20:55, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
Hook Alt1 is good to go! peace, groupuscule (talk) 20:55, 10 January 2014 (UTC)
