Template:Did you know nominations/The Best Intentions
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 1 October 2016 (UTC)
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The Best Intentions
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- ... that Ingmar Bergman based his Palme d'Or-winning film The Best Intentions on the life of his father Erik Bergman, (pictured) salvaged from scattered notes, stories and conversations? Source: Rochelle Wright, "The Imaginad Past in Ingmar Bergman's The Best Intentions," Ingmar Bergman: An Artist's Journey, 2011, Skyhorse Publishing, Inc.
5x expanded by Ribbet32 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:53, 21 September 2016 (UTC).
Overall nice work, just a couple adjustments needed. Length after expansion ok, date's ok, no copyvio detected. Apparently no need for QPQ as nominator has less than 5 DYKS. The hook is interesting, but you need to add citations immediately following the quoted sentences in the first two passages of the "Development" section, from which the hook is based, i.e. the sentences that end with "... complicated people." and "... isolated episodes." Also, footnote #7 is a dead link. --Al Ameer (talk) 21:27, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- Al Ameer son Valid point about the Development refs, added those. Footnote #7 was ripped off from German Wikipedia- just needed some tweak in the link, the website is still up. (Does it even matter if a link is dead if the ref is formatted and an access date given?) ::Ribbet32 (talk) 22:10, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
Ribbet32 (talk) 13:48, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for making those adjustments, the nomination is good to go. As for dead links, it's obviously better for verification purposes if the link could be fixed. This problem could usually be remedied by adding a link to an archived version. However, if it's a ripoff of Wikipedia, the source shouldn't be used at all because it would probably fail our reliability standards. --Al Ameer (talk) 23:59, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
