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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:36, 24 August 2014 (UTC)

Telegraph (sternwheeler 1914)

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... that the sternwheeler Telegraph twice collided with the rival Charm in 1915?

Created by Mtsmallwood (talk). Nominated by Aboutmovies (talk) at 19:05, 22 August 2014 (UTC).

Long enough, new enough. No copyvio, but cannot check all sources or verify hook due to offline sources. Assuming good faith. - Nathan121212 (talk) 16:07, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

I think there should be more commas in the hook:
ALT1: ... that the sternwheeler Telegraph twice collided with its rival, Charm, in 1915? Yoninah (talk) 14:03, 24 August 2014 (UTC)