Template:Did you know nominations/Tejashwi Yadav
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:48, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
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Tejashwi Yadav
[edit]... that Tejashwi Yadav is the successor of Lalu Prasad Yadav?
- Reviewed: Palkonda Hills
Created by Vibhijain (talk). Self nominated at 16:36, 11 July 2013 (UTC).
- ALT1
... that, according to sources, cricketer Tejashwi Yadav was paid between ₹30 lakh (US$36,000) to ₹40 lakh (US$48,000) by the Delhi Daredevils despite not playing any match?♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 16:48, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1
- Original hook not possible as there is nothing very interesting about someone being a son of a politician. And that will be only when readers actually understand who Lalu Prasad Yadav is. (It is however interesting for me, but not for all on main page.) ALT hook is kinda problematic. When i read it i thought it has to do something with match fixing. Majority readers who know nothing about fixing wont think it that way. But am sure you can rephrase it or see for another hook possible that doesn’t possibly give such negative impression. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 18:17, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that cricketer Tejashwi Yadav is one of the nine children of former chief ministers of Bihar Lalu Prasad Yadav and Rabri Devi? ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 10:39, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- Hook is verified. Article is new and long enough. Minor ce done. But can you cut short some quotes? 5 long quotes in such a small article is a bit too much. Maybe paraphrase a few and cut short others. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 04:15, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
- I have tried to do that a bit. I have not touched quotes regarding Politics as I find it tough to paraphrase them. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 15:33, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
ALT2 ready to go. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 18:27, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
- I have tried to do that a bit. I have not touched quotes regarding Politics as I find it tough to paraphrase them. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 15:33, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
- Hook is verified. Article is new and long enough. Minor ce done. But can you cut short some quotes? 5 long quotes in such a small article is a bit too much. Maybe paraphrase a few and cut short others. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 04:15, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
