Template:Did you know nominations/Tattooing in China

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 01:24, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
Article would have needed considerable work to be suitable for DYK.

Tattooing in China

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• ... that the history of Chinese tattoos? Source: Tattooing in China
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tattooing in China
  • Comment: A slight copyedit work will be appreciated.

Created by FaNCc (talk) and LUBINFNAN (talk). Nominated by FaNCc (talk) at 08:26, 8 December 2022 (UTC).

• While article is long enough and new enough, and well-referenced, the prose and language of the article is, to be honest, not currently legible. You will need a lot more than a slight copyediting to make this article eligible for the main page, being honest. It almost reads like machine translation from the sources. Juxlos (talk) 10:52, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
  • @Juxlos:We have made changes to the article translation. FaNCc (talk) 15:45, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

• It is still not up to main page standards in both style, formatting, sentencing, and language, and I don't even know where to begin copyediting it. Still a No from me. Juxlos (talk) 06:47, 9 December 2022 (UTC)