Template:Did you know nominations/Talabaw
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:58, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
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Talabaw
Talabaw soup
- ... that the traditional soup Talabaw (pictured) is regarded as the national dish of the Karen people in Myanmar, where the soup is used as a rice complement by consuming a large amount of soup with a small amount of rice in order to conserve the rice? Source: Duwun. "ကရင်မိသားစုတွေရဲ့ထမင်းဝိုင်းမှာ မပါမဖြစ်တာလပေါဟင်းတစ်ခွက်". Duwun. Retrieved 2022-12-27.
- ALT1: that the traditional soup Talabaw (pictured) is regarded as the national dish of the Karen people in Myanmar?
Created by Taung Tan (talk). Self-nominated at 06:38, 1 January 2023 (UTC).
Hi @Taung Tan:, welcome to DYK. While the article is long enough and new enough, the current prose of the article reads like a recipe, which really isn't how stuff should be written on Wikipedia. Before further review, could you restructure the second section? I would argue that the entire "Method" part can be removed, and the "ingredients" part can be condensed to one sentence. Juxlos (talk) 15:35, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Juxlos Thanks for your review. I've requested copyedit from my senior. pls kindly wait a few day. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 16:03, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- Juxlos Fixed, pls kindly review now. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 09:13, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
I removed the step-by-step process per WP:NOTGUIDE. No copyvio, length just about sufficient, new enough. QPQ done, referencing is sufficient. Hook interesting enough (probably can be shorter, ALT1 is provided) and AGF on Burmese sources. Good to go. Juxlos (talk) 09:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Juxlos Fixed, pls kindly review now. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 09:13, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Note to Dyk promoter, If possible... pls kindly use ALT0 with picture. The photo is my work. So I wanted to be proud of my work. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 09:46, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- Juxlos Thanks for your review. I've requested copyedit from my senior. pls kindly wait a few day. Thanks Taung Tan (talk) 16:03, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
