Template:Did you know nominations/Sutopo Purwo Nugroho

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 27 August 2018 (UTC)

Sutopo Purwo Nugroho

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• ... that Sutopo Purwo Nugroho has tweeted disaster information updates from a funeral and a hospital bed? Sydney Morning Herald
  • ALT1:... that despite having Stage IV lung cancer, Sutopo Purwo Nugroho continued to act as spokesman for the Indonesian National Board for Disaster Management? Straits Times
  • ALT2:... that Sutopo Purwo Nugroho has been called "the single most-quoted Indonesian official in the news during any disaster"? Straits Times

• Reviewed: Second DYKN. Am also currently reviewing the DYKN for Norvel Pelle.

Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 02:10, 8 August 2018 (UTC).

• Long enough, new enough, written in neutral manner and largely sourced. Hook (I choose ALT1 because I think it's very interesting) is sourced and appropriate for DYK. The prose could use some copyediting though, I spotted some grammar mistakes and acronyms that are used before being introduced in previous passages. I fixed some of them but please give the article a thorough copyediting before we could run this for DYK. WP:GOCER might be able to help too. QPQ is not needed because it's only your second nomination (reference). HaEr48 (talk) 18:19, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• @HaEr48: I've done some copyediting just now. Mind to check again? Juxlos (talk) 15:03, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• @Juxlos: Thanks for the copyedit. Upon closer look I find some information that's not found in the given citation. Could you check and clarify? See [1], I included the explanation in the challenge tag's `reason=` parameters. HaEr48 (talk) 23:08, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• @HaEr48: For the first tag, this is in the Kumparan article: "...Sutopo memulai kariernya dengan menggeluti bidang hujan buatan di Badan Pengkajian dan Penerapan Teknologi (BPPT) pada 1994.". I added the citation for the second tag. Juxlos (talk) 23:18, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• Good to go now. @Juxlos: Sorry for missing the Kumparan passage. 23:40, 12 August 2018 (UTC)