Template:Did you know nominations/Stewart Mell

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 20:02, 7 January 2014 (UTC)

Stewart Mell

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... that Stewart Mell scored Scarborough's first goal in the Football League?

Reviewed: Sin código
Comment: Or, for a longer hook,
Alt1: ... that Stewart Mell, who scored Scarborough's first goal in the Football League, worked as a firefighter during much of his football career?

5x expanded by Struway2 (talk). Self nominated at 16:40, 27 December 2013 (UTC).

The article was 17x expanded on 27 December, and nominated the same day. QPQ has been done. The article is of a decent standard, with inline citations and spotchecks shows no signs of close paraphrasing. The first hook-fact needs an inline citation, as there is nothing in the citation #13 that supports the claim. The second hook-fact is supported by an offline book, which I assume good faith on. Not related to the DYK-review, but I wonder if it is appropriate to state that "He played irregularly over the next three seasons", when you use this as a citation - isn't that close to OR? Mentoz (talk) 08:49, 7 January 2014 (UTC)

Per explanation on my talk-page: the hook-fact has an inline citation to an offline source, which I accept in good faith. Mentoz (talk) 10:11, 7 January 2014 (UTC)